Fiction work
Just a conversation!
Long distance relationship…
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Can
miles truly separate you from friends? If you want to be with someone you love, aren't you already there?
The girl started crying, her worst nightmare seeing light.
Boy: hey, you ok? You're crying.
Girl: are you still serious about me? About us?
Boy: what do you mean?
Girl: Just answer yes or no!
Boy: of course yes!
Girl: then why are we talking like this? Why are we always fighting?
The boy snapped and said:
Because we're both tired. We're tired of each other.
Girl: are you saying you're tired of me?
Boy: yes! I'm sick and tired of trying to love you when the truth is that I don't!
The girl was dumbfounded. Sometimes our some words make long distance. A set if tears have flowed at this revelation. Their love...has been one fat lie.
Girl: why did you have to pretend? Why did you let me believe, why did you let me hope?
Boy: I'm sick of this! We're over!
But after that, the boy was more devastated than the girl. He needed her. He felt stupid to let her go. He wanted her back, but the girl was too stubborn. (And ever has it been known that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation. )
One day, the boy called the girl out of the blues (The simple lack of her is more to me than others’ presence.)
Boy: what if?
Girl: huh?
Boy: what if I was wrong? What if, our love story had a continuation? What if it was never meant to end?
Girl: what are you talking about?
Boy: do you still want to be with me?
Girl: why are you asking?
Boy: just say yes or no
Girl: no.
Boy: you don't believe in "what if?" anymore?
Girl: no.
Boy: oh.
There was a long pause, then, "I love you."
The girl couldn't help but cry. She still loved him, but couldn't think of getting hurt again. But still believed in love and moved ahead... Love finds a way.
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Just a conversation!
Long distance relationship…
Girl: what if you never met
me?
Boy: I don't know. Things won't be any different.
Girl: oh!
Boy: I don't know. Things won't be any different.
Girl: oh!
The girl started crying, her worst nightmare seeing light.
Boy: hey, you ok? You're crying.
Girl: are you still serious about me? About us?
Boy: what do you mean?
Girl: Just answer yes or no!
Boy: of course yes!
Girl: then why are we talking like this? Why are we always fighting?
The boy snapped and said:
Because we're both tired. We're tired of each other.
Girl: are you saying you're tired of me?
Boy: yes! I'm sick and tired of trying to love you when the truth is that I don't!
The girl was dumbfounded. Sometimes our some words make long distance. A set if tears have flowed at this revelation. Their love...has been one fat lie.
Girl: why did you have to pretend? Why did you let me believe, why did you let me hope?
Boy: I'm sick of this! We're over!
But after that, the boy was more devastated than the girl. He needed her. He felt stupid to let her go. He wanted her back, but the girl was too stubborn. (And ever has it been known that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation. )
One day, the boy called the girl out of the blues (The simple lack of her is more to me than others’ presence.)
Boy: what if?
Girl: huh?
Boy: what if I was wrong? What if, our love story had a continuation? What if it was never meant to end?
Girl: what are you talking about?
Boy: do you still want to be with me?
Girl: why are you asking?
Boy: just say yes or no
Girl: no.
Boy: you don't believe in "what if?" anymore?
Girl: no.
Boy: oh.
There was a long pause, then, "I love you."
The girl couldn't help but cry. She still loved him, but couldn't think of getting hurt again. But still believed in love and moved ahead... Love finds a way.
That’s Love… simple yet complicated… it isn't about me or you..
For the relationship to nurture it should always be about US.
You
never know you might be the perfect couple but in different situations..
Song for the moment:
In
This Moment – “Forever
"The simple lack of her is more to me than others’ presence."
ReplyDeleteThat's where you said it all..
That's where love is defined to some extent, plain and simple.
Beautifully written..
Rest.... You know who's on my mind while reading this... ;)
Simpler life is easy it can be... I know who you talking about...
Deletefew people take their loved ones for granted... and regret later.. perfect short and crisp written piece:-) keep it up girl:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you :).. your motivation keeps me going
DeleteI suppose she knows this was going to end. She even know she was just trying to mend the broken rope. A women always have this intuition that something wrong is going to happen. She knows she can sense it better than man. She but then always try to work it out for their good. But when it finally ends. She knows its best to end for their good as she had tried and now is tired. This is how I understood it.
ReplyDeleteThis is how I sensed your blog. Its just my review
Tjhanks Rashmi, however in mah story there is a second chance.
DeleteIt is easy to fall in Love... THE HARD PART is knowing her can never be together because it was never he & she in the beginning
ReplyDeleteyou neva know.. the only thing is HOPE that keeps you going
DeleteAgreed
DeleteMiles can't separate two hearts that really cares....
ReplyDeleteJust Loved it!!!... <3
ReplyDeleteExchange girl for boy and boy with girl
ReplyDeleteand u will get my story Mrs. Bose
She just left me
and these part we discuss many times but at last she did it :) <3
Girl: are you still serious about me? About us?
Boy: what do you mean?
Girl: Just answer yes or no!
Boy: of course yes!
Girl: then why are we talking like this? Why are we always fighting?
The boy snapped and said:
Because we're both tired. We're tired of each other.
Girl: are you saying you're tired of me?
Boy: yes! I'm sick and tired of trying to love you when the truth is that I don't!
Nick