Tuesday, 16 December 2014

Finally !!! A YES !!!

Fiction Work:

 Been woken up by the voice of the dearest is the perfect start to a beautiful morning. The morning was indeed beautiful but Aayat wasn’t used to been woken up like this.


Infact over the past few years she was used to been woken by a kiss and the scent of the perfect Boss perfume coupled with her favorite Caffe Latte.


But today was different…..in fact quite different.
 After been living with Aahan for the past two years Aayat had started believing all mornings will be perfect like the first one.
They indeed were……….Except for this one, TODAY!
 It should be normal however it felt weird…Today, Aahan left without waking me up……..without giving me the kiss as the token of goodbye and motivation for the day.
 
The phone call had left a sour taste in her mouth.
The sourness entered her mouth whenever she got anxious.
And she surely was majorly anxious today.

Today, Aayat was having a tough day at work too… a prolonged hour for work  with the schedules she works .It  was not really a big deal for her but such demands were coming from the person  who never liked a last moment changes in anything.
Marine drive was her favorite place in the city of Mumbai and she loved being there all the times but today this name was giving her goosebumps.

Aahan has been acting quite weird over the past few weeks.
 A one time lover had now turned into a big workaholic who barely had time to sleep even on weekends.
 Their love life was going down like the wane in the sea.

Aayat knew she had often taken him for granted and hardly been expressive when it comes to love but then he was a part of her and he knew that.

She wondered if he had started falling out of love ….As her minds wandered, she was becoming a vulnerable, confusing soul. She wanted to break down and curse her fate once again.

Aahan came in her life when her life was at its worse. And he was responsible for turning it into a fairy tale.
 But today when everything was just mere perfect she felt like losing everything to her destiny once again.
 As she was lost in those thoughts, another call jolted her.

Aahan: Where are you?
Aayat: I …am…. (Lost, numb)?

Aahan: Not left right? Reach in 10 minutes….no ifs and no buts?  Understood?
Aayat: What is the urgency? What is the issue?

Aahan: Nothing….If you love me just reach….
Aayat: Hmmm…..Will be there.

Aahan: Good…. take care…..c ya
Aayat: C ya

She got up to freshen up (Damn, getting dressed up real fast is one of the goddamned thing in the world)Real quick !!!
 She took the keys and ran fast to her car.
 She was driving but her heart was making her dead, mind clouded and body close to numb
 She feared the worst but her heart was hoping  for the best.


She reached her favorite place and the favorite diner only to find emptiness.

On their permanent table was kept her favorite roses and an envelope with ‘the key’ and a letter.
 
She opened it to find the note:

” Reach the address mentioned below….I am waiting”

She got more anxious…..but couldn’t say much and react.

The address was of her dream house at the other end of the drive.

Anyhow she made her pace and reached the destination.

As she reached there, she was treated with another set of emptiness.

The keys fitted the door.
She entered a fairytale house with the most beautiful meadows. Her dream house….

She was scared to move in …….but; her eyes could trace him at the end.

She almost jumped in happiness with tears falling down and ran towards him .Its seemed ages as she was separated from him.

She was happy.
Before she could reach him, there he was sitting on his knees and a ring in his hands:
 And then he spoke those golden words….

Aahan:  I love you Aayat ! The best thing about me is you.…Would you like to share this beautiful life with this ‘bad boy’ of yours?. I love you simply, without problems or pride: I love you in this way because I do not know any other way of loving but this, in which there is no I or you, so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand, so intimate that when I fall asleep your eyes close…Will you be mine forever!!

She was blutterbunged and ecstatic. Full mixed bag of expressions on her face made way for a set of tears from those anxious colossal eyes.

Aayat : You sure?
Aahan: Why you aren’t?

Aayat : Off course I am just that….
Aahan: Now stop thinking and give an answer.

Aayat : YES YES YES.

And there she jumped to Kiss and hug him.
 
And then he smiled and said :

Aahan: So you finally said Yes.
Aayat: I had to.

Aahan: Hahaha you always had a no for an answer.
Aayat: Come-on, that’s not true.

Aahan : It is .
Aayat : It was just because you were the extra romance filled Hero.

Aahan: And I wasn’t one now?
Aayat: You almost gave me a heart attack today with your unusual schedule.

Aahan: That was because I had to sign the house papers.
Aayat: Whatever. You could have at least kissed me morning.

Aahan: Ahan. Then you might have said another no.
Aayat: Shutup. Dare you do something like this again.

Aahan: Why? You didn’t like the surprise.
Aayat: I loved it but I hated the anxiety.

Aahan: Now I know how to make you say yes.
Aayat: Shutup dare you do.

Aahan: Love you Babu.
Aayat: Love you too baby.

Aahan: So she finally said yes.
Aayat: Hahahha.

Aahan: A kiss to that girl in my arms.
Aayat: Idiot .

And then as they say….they lived forever ever after with those fights and those romances….!
 


“Love is needing someone. Love is putting up with someone's bad qualities because they somehow complete you”..

Song for the moment :
Marry me - Jason Derulo

12 comments:

  1. Beautiful piece of writing-) Romance and Priyanka go hand in hand :-)

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  2. i mean it.. your writings told me that:-)

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    1. that's another story... however its Fiction.. Writers can portray every emotion that well :)

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  3. It was beautiful and mesmerizing....
    I must say you are quite romantic person....

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    1. Finally , you commented.... Thank you Dishu... me romance :p tu to mat bol

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  4. Awsm pia👍 specially perposal lines... Loved it.. After reading ur way of romance am starting crushing on u☺️ Huuuppe

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    1. Hahaha Prince!!! Thank you indeed for the comment

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  5. Good job..great writing i mean..romantic :p

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    1. Unknown.... I guess I know who this is !!!

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  6. Superb.....blog, If karan johar read this blog he must make movie on it. ;)

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  7. Somewhere I felt I have lived this story with someone's really close to me..
    No words to describe ..😊
    You always make me speechless😘

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